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He looks out to the stars
And he thinks of your eyes
How, even in the darkest nights
They glisten so brightly and beautifully

He stands at the edge of the tide
And he misses the passion
That he can only know
Just by being near you

He does not ride a steed of snow white
And he will not compose a sonnet
Never will he stand at your door
Carrying a box of chocolates and roses

Your love is like the blood in his veins
The only thing keeping him alive
And everynight you sleep alone
He dies a painful death

He will tear down the gates of hell
And rip the devil apart
Face the wrath of all Gods and deities
Just to wipe away your tears

And if your heart was broken
He would pull out his own
And offer it to you freely
So you may live on

His words are of macabre
But his soul is only of love for you
He is your strong-in-heart poet
Your loving dark romantic
©2008-2010 =SteveJones313
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Author's Comments

Another poem that will feature in my up-coming book "Permit Me to Dream".

The inspiration was given to me after talking to a friend about a conversation they had had with their partner. This immediately leaped into my mind.

It's quite different to my other works, but I rather like this one.

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:icontherealemoprincess:
Wow :) I really love this!!! I'm gonna keep an eye on you
(but not in a creeper way) XD


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If you wanna cut yourself
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If you wanna kill yourself
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:iconmichelleleo71:
I simply adore it >.<
it's lovely, steve!!!

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:iconblackperegrin:
I just love this stanza:

"And if your heart was broken
He would pull out his own
And offer it to you freely
So you may live on"

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:iconblood-banker-j:
You seems to have portray quite an intense passion there. :)

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:icondark-star:
I'm not really one for poetry but I like this. A good contrast between the joys and quiet desperation of love.

(Not to be petty though hun, but you mean "Your" in that fourth stanza not "You're")
:iconhopelessheart330:
Simply beautiful.


One of my favorites of all you have written.

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:iconstevejones313:
Thank you! I think it's definately in my top ten ^^;

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:iconstevejones313:
Thanks for commenting; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Also, I've made the correction. Thank you for pointing that out.

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"SILENCE! I KILL YOU!" Achmed, the dead terrorist.

"If my shadow is all that survives, I'm still alive!" Meatloaf.

Pouring water on bunnies will not make them multiply!" Me
:iconstevejones313:
Thank you - it's certainly a different view point from the more stereotypical love poem.

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"SILENCE! I KILL YOU!" Achmed, the dead terrorist.

"If my shadow is all that survives, I'm still alive!" Meatloaf.

Pouring water on bunnies will not make them multiply!" Me
:iconstevejones313:
I thought it was rather potent :D

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"SILENCE! I KILL YOU!" Achmed, the dead terrorist.

"If my shadow is all that survives, I'm still alive!" Meatloaf.

Pouring water on bunnies will not make them multiply!" Me

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