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For You...

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I met you in a dream once
We walked hand in hand
Along the gentle tide of the sea
As it caressed the soft warm sand

This was your dream
A place where you could be alone
But you welcomed me into your dream
As if it were my own

I heard you sing to me once
When my mind was in pain
Your voice soothed my aching muscles
And made me feel strong again

This was your song
One you could sing alone
But you shared with me the melody
As if it were my own

I saw your room once
Decorated in your own cute way
You showed me all your plushies
And made me smile all day

This was your home
Where you could be alone
But you welcomed me in
As if it were my own

And although it seems
That this is all a dream
I am glad for it
This joy I have is how a heart should feel

My heart dreams of you
My soul sings your praises
And the door to my house is open

This is my life
For too long I have been alone
But I offer to share it all with you
As if it were your own
Edit:: April 12th 2010
Changed to "Poetry, Romantic, Post-Teen (Mature), Free & Blank Verse"
Moved to 'Poetry'Category
Editted 'Artist's Comments'
Submitted to #dA-Corner Feature Gallery
Added Word Count


Oh boy, where do I even begin. Without metioning names, I got involved with a friend which was a bad idea. We really weren't right for each other at all and I should have seen it coming, but I was a fucking tool as per usual. Anyway I wrote this song about my feelings at the time. Unfortunately this song found favor with ALOT of people and it became my most :+fav:ed, most viewed and most commented deviation which does annoy me quite as I don't believe it's my best work BY FAR.

Don't get me wrong - I think it's a good poem, but I went to write far better ones. *sigh*

Enjoy - everyone else has...

Word Count: 209
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Wildphoenix22's avatar
Very meaningful and well written poem! You should be really proud of this one, despite what you said in the Artist's Comment. (Although I can totally relate. Some of my more popular deviations are certainly NOT my best work.)