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Oblivion by =SteveJones313:iconSteveJones313:

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Oblivion!!!

Every second
I bleed a little more
On this cold and empty floor
Every moment
Of every day
My mind fades away.

What is this all for?
I can't take this pain anymore!

Pray to the God of annihilation
Failure is my highest expectation
There's no hope for salvation.
You buried our love in the past
At least you got the last laugh
This is the dawn of my oblivion!

You took my heart
Ripped away my fantasy
Commiting romantic blasphemy
You stole my soul
Gambled it all
And let me take the fall.

You made me blind so I couldn't see the light.
I still loved you, but I know it's not right!

Pray to the God of annihilation
Failure is my highest expectation
There's no hope for salvation.
You buried our love in the past
At least you got the last laugh
This is the dawn of my oblivion!

I was the wandering forgotten soul
With nothing to pray or to hope for
You left me nothing but my shame
But now thing's aren't quite the same

I'm not the fool I was back then
You're all alone, but I found love again
And as I lay next to my valentine
It get the last laugh this time!

Pray to the God of annihilation
Failure is your highest expectation
There's no hope for salvation.
You buried our love in the past
At least I got the last laugh
This is the dawn of your oblivion!

This is the dawn
This is the dawn
This is the dawn

Of your oblivion!
©2009-2010 =SteveJones313
:iconstevejones313:

Author's Comments

This song does have a tune, but owing to the fact I can neither read or write music, I can't get it down on paper - also, I can sing, but I can't play any instruments, so bugger it.

Anyway, this has a somewhat Three Days Grace style to it, although the inspiration for this song came from an Emo song written and preformed by one of the greatest comedians in the world, Bill Bailey.

Before anyone says, it fits with the tune I have for it, so do not say "this doesn't flow well" because, well, you don't know the tune, so there =p.

Time Take: 4 minutes

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:iconjohnmkimmins:
~JohnMKimmins Mar 2, 2009, 5:29:38 AM
i like it... the visuals are good

i particularly like this line

Pray to the God of annihilation
Failure is my highest expectation
There's no hope for salvation.

that seems to strike a chord with me subconsciously.. :+fav:
:iconstevejones313:
=SteveJones313 Mar 2, 2009, 5:32:55 AM
Me too =p

Thanks for the comment, fav and view, amigo. Much appreciated ^_^

--
"If my shadow is all that survives, I'm still alive!" - Meatloaf.

"Cake rocks the body, which rocks the party!" - Paul Caulfield.
:iconemohermionex:
~Emohermionex Mar 2, 2009, 8:37:52 AM
I don't what you mean about it not flowing...i can get a tune really nicely!!! :) its very good and i no wat u mean bout three days grace style...i can kinda of see them singing this :D

--
Lifes a bitch

Ivon by `emmil

Three turns should do it :)

"well how many of you are there, seven?eight?"
"Five and a half"
"a half?"
"he's a cat"

If you like poetry check out =SteveJones313 page his book is awesome
:iconwhitetiger7865:
~Whitetiger7865 Mar 2, 2009, 8:58:33 AM
oooo... I like it! Three Days grace is my favorite band! This is kind of dark in a way but VERY well written A+++ :D

--
"If i had to choose between loving you, and breathing, I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."
:iconstevejones313:
=SteveJones313 Mar 2, 2009, 12:52:03 PM
Thank you very much for taking the time to read ^_^

--
"If my shadow is all that survives, I'm still alive!" - Meatloaf.

"Cake rocks the body, which rocks the party!" - Paul Caulfield.
:iconstevejones313:
=SteveJones313 Mar 2, 2009, 12:53:03 PM
Thanks for the view and comment.

It makes me smile to see people taking an interest in the work I produce. Thanks again! ^_^

--
"If my shadow is all that survives, I'm still alive!" - Meatloaf.

"Cake rocks the body, which rocks the party!" - Paul Caulfield.
:icontherealemoprincess:
Mood: Wow! ~TheRealEmoPrincess Mar 2, 2009, 3:30:32 PM
This does seem to have a very Three Days Graces feel to it

I like it :)

--
xXMistyXx

"So if you wanna burn yourself
remember that I love you
If you wanna cut yourself
remember that I love you
If you wanna kill yourself
remember that I love you" Kimya Dawson
:iconwhitetiger7865:
~Whitetiger7865 Mar 2, 2009, 5:23:27 PM
of course!

--
"If i had to choose between loving you, and breathing, I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."
:iconemohermionex:
~Emohermionex Mar 3, 2009, 2:37:51 AM
no probs :)

--
Lifes a bitch

Ivon by `emmil

Three turns should do it :)

"well how many of you are there, seven?eight?"
"Five and a half"
"a half?"
"he's a cat"

If you like poetry check out =SteveJones313 page his book is awesome
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