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I've sung the heart-broken song before
But now my throat is dry
I've declared my undying love
Yet every night I've cried

You've long since stopped listening
And in truth you never really cared
I would continue in my quest to win your heart
But my song is wasted on the love-impaired

I stood under your window
And I called out your name
But you ignored me so easily
With you, it was always the same

And so I finally gave up
And I went on my way
And so I've carried this pain
Ever since that day

I'm walking under the rain
Trying to make sense of it all
But it's all in vain

And I still love you
It hurts so much inside
I wish I could move on too
But I'm walking under the rain

I've been wandering in my mind
Thinking of the love we had
Working out where it all went wrong
Was it all that bad?

I'm going round in circles
How did I ever lose you?
Can I ever find my way back
To a happier place?

I'm walking under the rain
Trying to make sense of it all
But it's all in vain

And I still love you
It hurts so much inside
I wish I could move on too
But I'm walking under the rain

(Brief electrical guitar/piano/drum instrumental)

And I still love you
As much as it hurts

I wish I could move on too...
But I'm walking under the rain...
©2007-2010 =SteveJones313
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Author's Comments

This is a song I wrote whilst thinking about something I hadn't really thought about in a long time. This is also a part of my 100 Theme Challenge as Item No. 30.

Please feel free to be as critical as you like.

Word Count: 251

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:iconkougalovr:
:tears: that is so emotional. very good. *blows nose*

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:iconstevejones313:
You like?

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"What is it now Eike? The Good Samaritan?" - Homunculus (Shadow of Memories)
:iconkougalovr:
yes. very much. you have great talent.

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guys in mini skirts are going to take over the world!!!!!!!!! :faint: :faint:
check out my new club for anime lovers ~Anime101Club
:iconstevejones313:
Wow, thanks alot! You really make me smile!

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"What is it now Eike? The Good Samaritan?" - Homunculus (Shadow of Memories)
:iconkougalovr:
:hug: your very welcome.

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guys in mini skirts are going to take over the world!!!!!!!!! :faint: :faint:
check out my new club for anime lovers ~Anime101Club
:iconstevejones313:
*Big smile*

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"What is it now Eike? The Good Samaritan?" - Homunculus (Shadow of Memories)
:iconsweetdreamkiss:
HOOOOOOOT
WOW
Again I can never get enough of your work

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Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

Men are like bank accounts.
Without a lot of money they don't generate a lot of interest.
:iconstevejones313:
Wow, thanks!

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"What is it now Eike? The Good Samaritan?" - Homunculus (Shadow of Memories)
:iconsweetdreamkiss:
your welcome

--
Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

Men are like bank accounts.
Without a lot of money they don't generate a lot of interest.
:iconstevejones313:
:)

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"What is it now Eike? The Good Samaritan?" - Homunculus (Shadow of Memories)

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